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 Sujet du message: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Mer Juil 04, 2012 5:42 pm 

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Alors voici ma petite proposition de traduction comme j'aime bien ce strip

-Raah
-It's the pits, even I remake, It's always shabby!
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-Allo!?
-Hey, howaya?
-bad, it's unsound!!
-Hold your horses...What's wrong?..
-I wanna drawing a persona in a completly purl posture. It's not stands to reason.It's gibberish!
-I'm pissed off!
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-But why don't you upturn your paper for draw the picture?
-That's a brilliant idea!!!!
-...Have you thought about tacking a break?

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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Ven Juil 06, 2012 8:32 am 
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ok, so here are some suggestions... i'm in a bit of a rush so my apologies for any mistake ^^;

-Raah
-It's the pits, even I remake, It's always shabby! / It's total crap. Even redoing it doesn't help; it's still bad
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-Allo!?
-Hey, howaya? / you ok ?
-bad, it's unsound!! / no, it's a nightmare
-Hold your horses...What's wrong?.. / Come on. What's happ...
-I wanna drawing a persona in a completly purl posture. It's not stands to reason.It's gibberish! / I have to draw a character in a completely upside down position. There's no logic. I can't get the hang of it
-I'm pissed off! / fed up
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-But why don't you upturn your paper for draw the picture? / well... why don't you turn your page to draw it ?
-That's a brilliant / great idea!!!!
-...Have you thought about tacking a break? / ever thought of taking some vacation ?


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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Ven Juil 06, 2012 8:37 am 

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yes that's better! ;D

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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Jeu Juil 26, 2012 7:24 pm 
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back to burgundy! yeah!

-Raah
-It's the pits, even I remake, It's always shabby! / It's total crap. Even redoing it doesn't help; it's still bad +1 for total crap and the rest of doudoubaer
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-Allo!?
-Hey, howaya? / you ok ? Hey, how are you?/what's up?
-bad, it's unsound!! / no, it's a nightmare +1 for doudoubaer
-Hold your horses...What's wrong?.. / Come on. What's happ... +1
-I wanna drawing a persona in a completly purl posture. It's not stands to reason.It's gibberish! / I have to draw a character in a completely upside down position. There's no logic. I can't get the hang of it +1 for doudou and "I can't picture it ( a little pun on top :p)
-I'm pissed off! / fed up +1
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-But why don't you upturn your paper for draw the picture? / well... why don't you turn your page [color=#BF0040]upside down to draw it ?[/color]
-That's a brilliant / great idea!!!!
That's brilliant!
-...Have you thought about tacking a break? / ever thought of taking some vacation ? +1 for taking a break

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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Ven Aoû 03, 2012 8:35 pm 

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Just a tiny suggestion.

-Raah
-It's the pits, even I remake, It's always shabby! / It's total crap. Even redoing it doesn't help; it's still bad +1 for total crap and the rest of doudoubaer
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-Allo!?
-Hey, howaya? / you ok ? Hey, how are you?/what's up?
-bad, it's unsound!! / no, it's a nightmare +1 for doudoubaer
-Hold your horses...What's wrong?.. / Come on. What's happ... +1
-I wanna drawing a persona in a completly purl posture. It's not stands to reason.It's gibberish! / I have to draw a character in a completely upside down position. There's no logic. I can't get the hang of it ... It doesn't make any sense... Instead of "There's no logic."
-I'm pissed off! / fed up +1
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-But why don't you upturn your paper for draw the picture? / well... why don't you turn your page [color=#BF0040]upside down to draw it ?[/color]
-That's a brilliant / great idea!!!!
That's brilliant!
-...Have you thought about taking a break?

I feel odd making only tiny additions; I'll have to take a crack at a full strip when my summer session finishes.

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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Dim Aoû 05, 2012 9:52 am 
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Ok with both of Shizenshikey's suggestions :)

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 Sujet du message: Re: Strip 13-Brain failure
MessagePosté: Mar Nov 13, 2012 7:50 am 
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-Raah
It's total crap. Even redoing it doesn't help; it's still bad
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-Allo!?
-Hey, howaya? / you ok ? Hey, how are you?/what's up?Hey, what's up? I prefer this one since the bubble is so small
-No, it's a nightmare!!
-Come on. What's happ...
-I have to draw a character in a completely upside down position. It doesn't make any sense. I can't get the hang of it
-I'm fed up!
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-Well... why don't you turn your page upside down to draw it ?
-That's a brilliant / great idea!!!!
That's brilliant! Wow that's just brilliant ! (I'm trying to find an emphasis)
-...Have you thought about taking a break?

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